Reviews for Innocent
Crimson Riley chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
I liked this a lot... everything is in the eyes... no?
Lorna 'Alia Bright Child' Hale chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
Very good. I probably wouldn't have known what it was about without the summary, but you used the right words. I can relate to this. I like your repitition of "innocent". And the change it the end. Very good! Keep writing!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
wow.. I woukdnt know what it was about w/o the summary... but after reading it... its amazing.. nice repition and I think it describes some people's feeling very well... awesome poem... I love it