Reviews for An ExPerfect Place
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 5/27/2005
Know the feeling, great job
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 8/12/2004
I can relate. I like the butterfly metaphor.
AutumnRhapsody chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
I really like it, espcially the second stanza. The "we chased butterflies" part is really beautiful-meaningful it seems. But it feels to me that it should maybe have been longer-more parts like that. But the next stanza goes with it would be difficult. But I think it's good this way, I really like it.
AmethystTrish chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
beautiful piece. can totally relate.
Willow Elandria chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
Simple, but poignant. I like it.
You repeat "perfect" twice in the first and last stanzas... this coud be intentional, but I think it might sound better with a little more variation in your words.
Otherwise, very good.
Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
I like the metaphor, and the imagery. Beautiful work.
IcyDevil27 chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
_ Another great piece!
karmakaze chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
Aww. That's sad:-(
Good work!
KaseyLovesNoOne chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
I love this! Alot! I can relate, which makes it even better.
Henry Gray chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
Simple but sad. I like it. Especially the butterfly thing...nice analogy of how the situation changed.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
so relatable... *sighs* wow.