Reviews for Money Job
Matt chapter 5 . 3/12/2009
Why didn't you continue I really like it!
kirarin242 chapter 4 . 7/30/2008
lol that's so cute/funny but the chapter was short P but still loved it
kirarin242 chapter 3 . 7/30/2008
AH i love this story so much it's so cute!x3!
Alice E. Creadan chapter 4 . 12/12/2006
'Alloh, dear.

Alice would merely like to state that your writing is magnificent. You're quite talented, if I do say so myself (and I do). Definately an interesting story, dear. Interesting enough to keep Alice's attention for at least an hour, now. And that is practically unheard of.

Do keep up the good work.

I'll be looking foreward to reading more of your work.
Me chapter 5 . 1/22/2006
GO THEATER! WOOT WOOT! I am kind of upset that you wont be continuiong this considering the fact you havent updated in about oh id say TWO FLIPPIN YEARS! *just go away LEAVE ME ALONE!* *sobs*
Tate Soyker chapter 5 . 3/22/2005
This is a good begining. You just need to update so I can read more!
Yueenigma chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
I love your story Monewy Job... I've been waiting anxiusly for your update but you haven't so... Please, Please, PLEASE update! I'm begging you. I can't wait till they finally notice they are both... What's the term? Well, anyway looking forward to your next chap. Talk to you later!
Remarr chapter 5 . 6/7/2004
Please update! I can't wait to see what Frost'll do after this and I can't wait to see how his audition goes! I bet he'll be Juliet and Rain'll be Romeo or something like that...it would be so adorable!But that's probably just the incense going to my head. Don't ask.
Great story!
Kethry Jonas chapter 5 . 6/1/2004
This is really good! nice cliffhanger. Frost seems so...frosty! he probably has a really bad experience hidden in his past. poor baby. -(
This is coming along really well! Good job.
D
Esquirella chapter 5 . 6/1/2004
I will DEFINITELY stay with this story. I really love the characters and can't wait for their reactions to finding out they're both in the same business. Leah is a great addition, too. Duke seemed a little cold about his models in the first chapter (which he needed to be, I know). Leah will balance that out.
Alex-Blake chapter 5 . 6/1/2004
Why is frost snogging Leah?
This chapter is to rushed (you need to slow down).
Frost has just met Leah and is surpposed to be shy/reserved so it seems that he's acting out of character. I think you need to make somethings more clear about the people in this. It was alos way to intense (and not in a good way) it was to much to soon.
The love story in this is lost, all it seems to be about is Frost getting bullied.
Your a good writer but relax and try to make some points more clear.
yami990 chapter 5 . 5/31/2004
more please
velvetstargirl chapter 5 . 5/30/2004
ah! this is so amazing! i love frost and i love rain, ah and i am just ah! it's awesome, i love the twists and turns it takes, i love it so much! you are truly awesome. seriously, you never cease to amaze me and today was kinda a shitty day, but now that i've read your story there is this bright smile on my face because you've made me so happy, this story has so much...so much to it, i can't wait to see more!
Pyrefly chapter 4 . 5/27/2004
OH! Soo intesrsting, I'm liking it, continue soon. Wonder if they find out that they are both porn stars when they have to do eachother! Is that what's gonna happen? Did I guess correctly! Please update soon, I'm excited.
~Pyrefly
Alex-Blake chapter 4 . 5/25/2004
I'l wait for chapter 5 to review properly since this one was short, buts good so far.
Alex
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