Reviews for That Day
FreewayofFlight chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
Wow, 'Yesterday' has alot of depth in it! (Plus your 'Traffic' poem is really good too, I liked it!)
spike0313 chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
luverly, I really liked that [snugs]
and the non caps sorta seem to fit
confused being99 chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
wow, thats a very good poem. A peice of advice... try using capitals in poems and stories, its annoying, but it makes your work look better. Still, you did a great job, keep writing
~confused being99~