Reviews for For Whom the Story is Told |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The jumps in time are rather unsmooth. The plot is...well okay XD Your writing skills are good and there are quite some nice details. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh! I liked this! The begininning gave me a bit of a jump but it made it even more likeable hehe |
![]() ![]() interesting storyline so far, keep up the good work, will be looking for next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... that's... explicit. At least you're a guy. I know waay too many girls that write this sort of stuff, and you can tell it's just a horny little girl that's written it. Update soon! |