Reviews for Ten worlds we walk
DiamondLotus chapter 1 . 9/22/2004
Amazing poem! I enjoyed your rhyme scheme, it really flowed nicely through the poem, and the subject matter is deeply inspired and wonderful as well. Keep on writing!
Karma Fish chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
A little wordy and difficult to read, but the ideas completely make up for that. I like the fifth stanza, and also the phrase "the calming of the Buddha's shawl." A peaceful image.
Shana the white dragoon chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
that was a great poem! keep up the good work:) i hope to hear more poems such as thing one
Kyaroru Fanel chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
This is very beautiful...nice to hear this kinda poetry still.