|Reviews for Drunken Tongue|
| diphenhydramine chapter 1 . 8/24/2004
wow...that was so so vivid. i love it's decadent feel.
| Autumnymph chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
Your works are mostly one of a kind. I love the way you describe things and everything using powerful words... (Dammit! I lost my dictionary!)
| pseudocidal chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
I love the way you describe things...it's just amazing. You paint such a picture, it's like you can see everything that you write. Nice one
| mattrc chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
whoa...that was worded way differently than other stuff i've seen. review my stuff if you want, it's not that great, i'm just getting started with writing. very cool poem. its different, which is a good thing.
| C.W. Sims chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
"alcoholic tongue of false pretenses"-really cool. I love the way you word your work. very intelligent and descriptive. you really paint a picture.
| CydCharisse chapter 1 . 5/27/2004
I wasn't quite sure what to say at the end of the poem. It was so beautiful, it left me speechless. I just didn't have anything to comment on.
So after that, I decided to look at the reviews for this poem...maybe see what other people wrote.
I saw that basically everyone was like me- Speechless. I also saw that the most common reply to this poem was 'Wow.'
I hate to follow a crowd, and I wish I could review properly for something this great, but I'll just jump on the bandwagon, and...
| vanburen chapter 1 . 5/27/2004
Never read anything like this before, an intriguing poem!
| sunstormed chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
wow...wow. that was absolutely wonderful. great word choice, i love your idea behind the poem and i think you did a great job portraying it. loved it!
| The Black Rider chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
Very interesting and true. The third line was a bit awkward, but otherwise, excellent. I loved "the alcoholic tongue of false pretenses."
| Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
interesting! Good extended metaphor! Very sensual.
| Angelic Hellraiser chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
| A Beautiful Nightmare chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
Short yet it says so much... and it has wonderful vocabulary... excellent...
| tofujunky chapter 1 . 5/24/2004
I hate to be repetitive - but goddamn it, I'm all out of compliments. It's one gorgeous piece after another . . . you can't possibly blame me for being speechless.
Your words and vocabulary are always dazzling - they sparkle with intellectual extravagance. You're bloody virtuosa.
| WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 5/24/2004
i definately liked it, but it seemed like it was missing something...
| Mistress Mira chapter 1 . 5/24/2004