Reviews for A Hypocritical Poem
i was a postcard chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
I love this. Even though I'm feeling, like, the exact opposite. (Ha, I'm such a like, valley girl, like, ya know?) And this really went well...flowed well? Yeah, that's better. "I want to smash every eloquent word / Break the lines until they're blurred" Ah, so great. But don't stop writing. Cause that would not be so great. D
reggie got shot chapter 1 . 5/24/2004
Wow. That is really expressive and well-written. I love it.