Reviews for City Street After a Downpour of Rain
Pico the Great chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
Hooray! I can see this happening. It's cool, and I like the whole imagery of rain. I know you had to do "fly quick" as part of the rhyme scheme, but it still works out quite well.
Yay!
-PTG
beatlesloser chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
good, i liked it, especially how it captured a singular moment like a haiku's really meant to do. the rythym is a bit off, but still quite good for first attempt
A Beautiful Nightmare chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
Very well done for your first haiku but work on the rhythm...