Reviews for sunny
First Lady chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
I love it! The way the lines are broken in irregular places... and the imagery... and the thought of chairs being impersonal. I especially like the way that little "perhaps" all on its own on one line introduces the metaphors.
a e i o u and sometimes y chapter 1 . 8/30/2004
Aw
"Perhaps
A piano key that is struck too quickly and catches the audience"
That part especially caught my attention. It added a little bit of spice to the poem. Great, great, great.
Incubabe chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
Aw... cutesy lovey stuff... aw...
"Perhaps
A piano key that is struck too quickly and catches the audience"
It's always the piano and I love it!