|Reviews for so the sky rises|
| insertterriblypoeticlinehere chapter 1 . 2/9/2005
Bootiful. You are so going on my favorites list.
Anyway, to add more substance: I love your style, your structure. it really adds to the poetry. The last line closes it up quite nicely, with the perfect feeling. The italics work very nicely throughout the poem. But I will say, that the message is kind of...murky. You get a definate feeling from it, and it's wonderful, but I cant quite see what it's saying. Maybe another read. Anyway, great job again!
| do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 10/19/2004
beautiful amazing lovely wow this just blew my mind. i'm in awe.
| ylem chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
You seem to have this thing about spherical rooms with no windows. & you make me feel much inferior in comparison. To close your eyes & lose Europe...that is just too marvelous & beautiful & wonderful & insertadjectiveshere for words.
| EveryNowAndThen chapter 1 . 5/30/2004
Simply amazing. I wish there was more to say but I'm lacking the words.
| superfufu chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
something that taps my interest needs my commendment.
nice job. it made me smile.
| Incubabe chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
Ah... the last line. So beautiful.
And nicely arranged as well, fp usually hates structured poems but nicely done! *mwah*
| floorcollision chapter 1 . 5/24/2004
excellent- very articulate... yet vague. this pulls on my heart!
really, thanks for writing!