|Reviews for on a park bench|
| Zoe Marhassa chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
That. Was. Awesome.
| insertterriblypoeticlinehere chapter 1 . 2/9/2005
Wow. I really like your style, not the typical stanzas, or even free verse, it seems. The sudden change of structure was nice, interesting. 'as if he’d hesitate to crush them and hear bone against bone.' I liked this very much. I must go and read more...
| do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 10/20/2004
so stream of thought and beautiful. this was so original and wow. i absolutely love it.
| Another Pseudonym chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
nice piece. i like the intertwining of the girl's discription with the guy's thought processes.
| this is britt chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
your style- it's so great. It's so ingenious.
| Incubabe chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
Weird and beautiful and so, so you.