|Reviews for In the Morning|
| she's not breathing chapter 1 . 6/18/2004
so optimistic. it's nice to know you can write a whole range of poems. they vary so much. this one's cool 'cause it sets a setting and then delves into the emotions. good job again!
| Clare chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
Im very impressed with you Ian. It was really really good for your first positive poem. It really cant get much better
| myno chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
oh... this is a very well-written poem. you did an excellent job. I have no suggestions.