Reviews for A Woman Scorned
LifeUnlived chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
Wow, very… mysterious to put it plainly. This is very well done. I’d like to invite you to a writing forum. I hope you enjoy the community and share some of your interesting works.
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slave to the voices chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
It's a very blunt story with no twists. I can tell you're a young writer (a lot of useless words, "and then" and "after that", take them out, you don't need them). Your work will get better as you read, learn, and experience more. However, your grammar and spelling are very good. It's great that you are learning to put your thoughts and ideas into stories down. Good job, keep writing.
**Slave**