Reviews for Bliss
child of forgotten lore chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
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i really like this
Ariel S chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
I like the description and the trueness of this poem. I understand where you're coming from. It's like delving into your mind. Very good for a first poem. I'll add it to my favorite stories list.
Sang Yu Nung chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
Great work! I really liked the opening, that part was very smooth. The rest was nice as well & I love how in some parts you sort of rhyme (not the perfect kind, but good enough!)
Kris 56 chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
Wow, that's really well written! This is your first poem? This is really good! I like it a lot!