Reviews for Broken
Stuffblah chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Wow. This is amazing.

It's short but just..fabulous. Simple but really makes you think... :)

It's given me an idea for a new story actually. Thanks! Your a real inspiration.
Mormon Princess 1 chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
Nice.. Ilike it a lot!
Needa S chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
Sad... Awesome write!
Edraith chapter 1 . 7/23/2004
Beautiful, the idea of taking one's heart asd if it was an object makes this astonishing and fits well with the idea of the haikus to shiw things from unexpected angles. I like the melancholy, sad tone.
sifer chapter 1 . 7/3/2004
this touches me, i feel sad now.
twilightwriter07 chapter 1 . 5/27/2004
Nicely done...the images here are conveyed really well.
Sang Yu Nung chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
I like it- good and angsty.. for only 17 syllables... you give a good tone and people get the image nice work!