Reviews for Tears of the Stars
crybabekrizz chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
i totally lurv this poem! it hurts so much... love hurts so much... sigh. welps gud job. and continue writin!
invalid id chapter 1 . 5/30/2004
I love the title! This was so beautiful, I loved it, just wowzerz. Stunning.
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
beautiful question posed here! Catch a falling star, "When does it glow brightest against your gentle breast?" I love it!
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
That was beautiful!
saraiyu chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
that was so beautiful...especially the last four lines
Tommy2007 chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
That was a good poem, as always I doubt there are any bad comments. I do like the idea of a "veiled horizon" a lot, it's so emotional!
EWindheim chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
Sorry if my poems seem sad of late. Just have this really bitter view of love right now.
Kris 56 chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
Wow, such tragedy, and yet, this is so well written. I love this poem. It's beauty is really amazing. I like it a lot.
Gleechumber chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
This is lovely... I like the way the lines get shorter towards the end, though I don't know if that was intended or not. I love the first four lines especially.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
"Kills you with their lie,
And you are doomed to always,
And forever,
Cry. "
That was so beautiful honney. Wow... So sad... U Ok? Wonderful poem though.