Reviews for Forsaken Identity
StarEyed14 chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
Wow. What a wonderful refreshing story! This was also great first chapter. I couldn't find anything wrong with it.

CrazyCowgirl101 chapter 26 . 11/27/2008
Gr! I love you and hate you at teh same time! I am so sad! I cannot imagine how you felt writing this. I would have cried. I owuld have burst into tears and cried.
CrazyCowgirl101 chapter 10 . 11/27/2008
I love Timon. The way that you make him act like a lord one day and the Prince the next really changes things. Its also good that you sorta make hims seem like the bad guy, you know? I want to believe that he is good, but there is always something new that makes me change my mind. I go back and forth! I just can't decide.
CrazyCowgirl101 chapter 8 . 11/27/2008
I LOVE this story! Its grippin! AND I didn't even guess that the man would end up being teh Prince! What an amazing twist!
Georgiana chapter 26 . 8/20/2008
Excellent story, but she most definitely could have gone with him. You are just evil and malicious. :P
Guest chapter 26 . 12/9/2007
You should have labeled your story as angst.
yayawhynot89 chapter 26 . 9/25/2007
m i think the fic could have been developed better it seemed rushed and didn't really get all of the points across but i've read worse
coours of the rainbow chapter 26 . 9/21/2007
just wanted to say that i really loved the way it turned out.

i agree very much on the issues regarding Lena and Timon, that they should be separated and that their love would be a bittersweet one.

the Story was Great! and i dont think any other ending would have done it justice.

too many happy endings give us too much comfort sometimes.
All's End chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
Words.Love.Music chapter 26 . 7/9/2007
That's a wonderfull Story you wrote!

The End was so emotional i had to cry.

Very touching and tragic Story but still wonderful!
cherrypiesizzle chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
I love historical stories; you did this beautifully.
AuburnGraces chapter 25 . 5/14/2007
I only decided to review this story after reading the entire thing (it was quite addictive!) I really loved your use of the love triangle, the two male characters felt so real and you actually felt for the decision she had to make- neither choice would bring her complete happiness. It made a great change from the stories showing a typical good guy/bad guy, and instead showed a security vs. love (however unsuitable). I also really appreciated your ending, it always annoys me when an author ignores the logic of the circumstances for the sake of a happy ending, your ending was very fitting and I'm glad you made that choice.
atreyu love chapter 12 . 3/4/2007
the story's interesting
atreyu love chapter 7 . 3/4/2007
its intersting
Nerdette chapter 26 . 2/17/2007
I still don't know what to make of this story's ending...
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