Wow. What a wonderful refreshing story! This was also great first chapter. I couldn't find anything wrong with it.

-Nina

Gr! I love you and hate you at teh same time! I am so sad! I cannot imagine how you felt writing this. I would have cried. I owuld have burst into tears and cried.

I love Timon. The way that you make him act like a lord one day and the Prince the next really changes things. Its also good that you sorta make hims seem like the bad guy, you know? I want to believe that he is good, but there is always something new that makes me change my mind. I go back and forth! I just can't decide.

I LOVE this story! Its grippin! AND I didn't even guess that the man would end up being teh Prince! What an amazing twist!

Excellent story, but she most definitely could have gone with him. You are just evil and malicious. :P

You should have labeled your story as angst.

m i think the fic could have been developed better it seemed rushed and didn't really get all of the points across but i've read worse

just wanted to say that i really loved the way it turned out.

i agree very much on the issues regarding Lena and Timon, that they should be separated and that their love would be a bittersweet one.

the Story was Great! and i dont think any other ending would have done it justice.

too many happy endings give us too much comfort sometimes.

:D

That's a wonderfull Story you wrote!

The End was so emotional i had to cry.

Very touching and tragic Story but still wonderful!

I love historical stories; you did this beautifully.

I only decided to review this story after reading the entire thing (it was quite addictive!) I really loved your use of the love triangle, the two male characters felt so real and you actually felt for the decision she had to make- neither choice would bring her complete happiness. It made a great change from the stories showing a typical good guy/bad guy, and instead showed a security vs. love (however unsuitable). I also really appreciated your ending, it always annoys me when an author ignores the logic of the circumstances for the sake of a happy ending, your ending was very fitting and I'm glad you made that choice.

the story's interesting

its intersting

I still don't know what to make of this story's ending...