|Reviews for Relentless|
| catseyeview chapter 4 . 4/25/2012
I understand this poem as if this is my own. I feel there is a spirit through that helps you write this way...just lovely and uplifting.
| Anastasia Who chapter 4 . 4/25/2012
This poem was really good. Very nicely written. I love the use of symbolism and how it is written. Beautiful poem.
| Getuie chapter 4 . 4/25/2012
Intense expressions of emotion.
"These are the cries I can share with none,
my madness, divine, by none understood,"
These lines were the ones I noticed the most... I could definitely relate with that.
| poetic abortion chapter 4 . 4/25/2012
::hugs you.:: - THis was so good ! _
| Ivriniel chapter 4 . 4/25/2012
Beautiful. Again, I love your images.
| Manuel Fajar chapter 4 . 4/25/2012
Patient,—love doth wait,
(Patient love doth wait)
Heart that dwells for perfection,—
(Heart's dwelling of perfect grace)
(Circle of fulfillment)
| lovelikeamixtape chapter 4 . 4/25/2012
Absolutely gorgeous. Reminds me of a song by Jewel.. 'Absence of Fear.' Amazing work.
| Ironic Presence chapter 4 . 4/25/2012
So beautiful, so exactly how I feel. Just one thing: "in the silken flesh of my heart" doesn't really fit right. It's just the "silken", really, that doesn't quite work for me. But the rest is perfect.
| Anastasia Who chapter 3 . 4/25/2012
AWESOME! So moving and powerful. This is def. one for my fav. This is a great one to read when I am feeling alone and depressed. It is so awesome to know we have a God who loves us so much. WOW!
| Getuie chapter 3 . 4/25/2012
The repetitions in the first stanza really does something to make the reader aware of the anxiousness. It was so beautifully employed, I just had make mention of it.
The rhyme was also something I noted. It really gave pace to the poem. In the second stanza I normally would have said not to use Me to rhyme with twice, BUT its use there really emphasized the longing... again, the repetition, as with the first stanza, just builds onto the poem.
There are some parts of the poem where the rhyme fails a bit, but I personally am not someone so much focused on that. The poem well written and the message is there. The last two lines... gorgeous. It was really something that just stood out to strike me like a sledgehammer.
Although not a favourite of mine from your work. It's still a good poem all the same
| elvenstorm chapter 3 . 4/25/2012
Love the title! So beautiful. Anyway, very nice poem, made me smile at it's sweetness. Like the day and night repetition. Keep writing as you are very talented!
| Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
Du schreibst unglaublich eindringlich Gedichte, ohne dass sie sentimental werden. Mir gefallen auch die einzelnen Wort über den Kapiteln.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 2 . 6/16/2005
Those last lines are of the lingering kind "breaking my heart for love/dying to give you love." Wowee. I wish to sing them over and over.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/16/2005
The flow is excellent. I like it immensely for it weaves the words powerfully in and out of carefully chosen imagery. I esp. like the line "my blood colours every rose"
| Haunted-dreams05 chapter 2 . 6/12/2005
Wow! Very powerful poem. I love the message it potrays and the feeling of love behind it. Very nicely written. Great work. I like the end where you say'see the hurt behind the hate,hurl myself towards spike and blade,breaking my heart for love,dying to give you love.'That is really powerful there and a great way to end this poem. Christ died to show and give us love. Awesome job.