Reviews for Memories of You
queenvixta chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
I can seriously relate to this piece at the moment. It sucks when memories are all you have left but at least you remember the happy times. Good job, Queen-V
Amara Ryden chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
nice job. it's very sweet. )
IcyDevil27 chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
They sound like fond memories. Makes me wanna go see my grandmother now. Sorry for your loss! Great poem!
Pissed Off Poet chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
small error. "I miss the gays we spent together"
but don't worry about it. You get your point across very nicly. I had a grandma like that too. i miss her a lot, and this poem brought back all of those good memories. Again, nice way to relate to the readers.
Willow Elandria chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
Aww, that's really sweet, especially the first stanza. I love "the smell of gum."
Two of the lines were a little too long, maybe break them up so they fit the rest of the poem. Also, I think you meant "days" instead of "gays." hehe.
Otherwise, very well done.
KaseyLovesNoOne chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
Made me think of my grandpa a bit... I could feel your pain in this one really well... Good work.
Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
Very nice poem. Sad. I can definitely relate. it'll be better if the ending was stronger.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
cute :)