Reviews for Half Past Forever |
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![]() ![]() its one of the most wonderful story i've ever read. please continue writing stories such as this: ) |
![]() ![]() what a nice story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Just wow. I'm so happy I could cry. I don't know if you check your inbox on here anymore, it's been over 10 years since you posted this, but this is one of if not the most amazing story I've ever read on FictionPress. If you ever decide to get this published (which I think you should) it will forever be a staple in my book collection. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was absolutely wonderfully written. the characters sooo realistic and the storytelling utterly captivating. thank you for making my heart jump in joy and suspense. thank you for making my mind fly together with the story as if I was Sydney. amazing. |
![]() ![]() My heart is so happy for the wonderful ending, yet so sad that it's over. Only a good story can make a person feel that way! I absolutely adored this little story. I loved the characters, and the plot, and how it's set during a very important time in history... I just LOVED it. Thank you so much for sharing this! |
![]() ![]() I have cried and this was an amazing story! I don't cry very easily so that is saying something. Continue like this, you are awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Actually, they didn't give medals out to females. Many great nurses went on unrecognized during that time. |
![]() ![]() Awww this is such a nice story! Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really, really want to read this story, but the formatting is driving me crazy! Is there anything you can do about it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my god i loved it i was crying at the end too |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww, I'm sad it seems they didn't meet up with Audrey after the date she knew she went back, but this is a very wonderful bittersweet ending. Lovely story. Thank you so much for posting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() For some reason, "Well, that's aces!" really strikes me perfectly. It's so Jack, and holds all the personality of the time period. Love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is NOICEEEEEE! But I think it would be better if you make spaces so it'd be easier to read |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely adore this story. Its so sweet and touching and I love the ending. Beautiful ;-) |
![]() ![]() PERFECT! I cried like a baby This was so good! |