Reviews for Tide |
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![]() ![]() ![]() *ponders for awhile*... Oh! I get it now! Yea! (Slaps myself on back). Cool metaphor... It was quite short compared to your other poems, true, but it certainly did the job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like how you used tide as a metaphore. i like this poem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Actually its called tide, cause it was about the tides of war.. which was originally in the lines, but i changed it to going out into war... felt it was more appropriate |
![]() ![]() ![]() great poem. it did get the point across despite being very short. i don't get why it was called "tide." i would love to know... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is going to sound really corny, but here goes: *ahem* Wow. Powerful. Amen to that. |