Reviews for Tide
Midnight Proc chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
*ponders for awhile*... Oh! I get it now! Yea! (Slaps myself on back). Cool metaphor... It was quite short compared to your other poems, true, but it certainly did the job.
imgone chapter 1 . 5/27/2004
i like how you used tide as a metaphore. i like this poem.
Prospero Mortem chapter 1 . 5/27/2004
Actually its called tide, cause it was about the tides of war.. which was originally in the lines, but i changed it to going out into war... felt it was more appropriate
do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 5/27/2004
great poem. it did get the point across despite being very short. i don't get why it was called "tide." i would love to know...
Myra Storms chapter 1 . 5/27/2004
This is going to sound really corny, but here goes:
Wow. Powerful. Amen to that.