Reviews for You Left
Ethereal October chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
Some interesting contrasts there. I could relate to it a lot. I do think you could sharpen the language you use to make those contrasts and make the poem that much more powerful.
rogue mystique chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
oh wow, stunning, i know exactly how you feel, cept i dont trust him no more, thanks for the review, i love this poem!
J. Lessard chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
Well, I'll read more of your stuff sooner or later but I like to review something from someone who reviewed me in return. This poem, though original in the way it is written, says nothing the public hasn't heard before but what is original these days anyway? I like it and I think it had some heart put into it. [Dukky]
Amie chapter 1 . 5/27/2004
Oddly this is what happened to me. Ass, Michael was, but why do I keep on coming back?