Reviews for White Boy with an Afro
Demon Donatello chapter 1 . 5/31/2004
Hm... Good, but I'm not much of a rap person myself. I think Odin might like this though, I'll tell him about it next time I see him! Thanks for reviewing 'My Dream', and I always try to review people who review me _ Thanks again, and keep writing!
touchingbottom chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
Great rap! It had nice flow. I especially liked it because, I, too have a white man's fro. It's bright orange. _
Lynnie-Pooh chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
LOL! this is so FUNNY! My fave part was:
"he got a creature.
Large and fluffy,
Brown and puffy.
It sat on his head,
it looked kinda dead.
Oh wait I know,
it's his Afro!"
That was really funny. Keep writingand r/r my stories!
rap-sucks chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
Hilarious!
"He saw his first black man" hah!
I actually know a white boy with an afro...well he's actually like Cuban or soemthing, but he's still white.
Calmly Chaotic chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
lol, That was really funny! Reminds me of a guy at my school. Thanks for reviewing my story, I will post more chapters later. ;)
enfluxuate chapter 1 . 5/27/2004
That is very funny!One thing you should change..
"and he stroked his Afro"
make it:
"and he stroked his 'fro"