|Reviews for What do I see?|
| ScarletWishingstar chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
wow..i know those words have gone through my head before...chills and goosbumps and the whole shebang. lovely lovely lovely
| MagenDavid chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
My best friend's (Happy-Platipus) Father accepted a job in another city and there were rumors that they might move so that he wouldn't have to drive so far to work. I nearly had a heart poem is sort of saying "Well how do you expect me to react? You my really good friend and you're going away!" Great expression of feelings! Good job!
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 7/10/2004
I love this piece, the uncontrollable feeling that you have no control over a loss! You web me back to a time of similiar memories which made me sad...which only means you've done a great job with this poem if you are able to pull such emotion from the reader...PS: love your penname, your description would almost fit me also...
| haunted moonlight chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
this poem really hit me...there is a very big chance i might be moving, and this poem decribed how i've been feeling alot lately...great work