Reviews for What do I see?
ScarletWishingstar chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
wow..i know those words have gone through my head before...chills and goosbumps and the whole shebang. lovely lovely lovely
MagenDavid chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
My best friend's (Happy-Platipus) Father accepted a job in another city and there were rumors that they might move so that he wouldn't have to drive so far to work. I nearly had a heart poem is sort of saying "Well how do you expect me to react? You my really good friend and you're going away!" Great expression of feelings! Good job!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 7/10/2004
I love this piece, the uncontrollable feeling that you have no control over a loss! You web me back to a time of similiar memories which made me sad...which only means you've done a great job with this poem if you are able to pull such emotion from the reader...PS: love your penname, your description would almost fit me also...
haunted moonlight chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
this poem really hit me...there is a very big chance i might be moving, and this poem decribed how i've been feeling alot lately...great work