|Reviews for A Pair Of Rogues|
| gloriously mad chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
I shouldn't be amused, yet somehow I am.
But please, please, stick to one tense and use proper punctuation. More people'll read what you write if it's not painful on the eyes.
| Forsakn chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
Uhm.. okay. I kind of like your story. But you've a lot of errors. First off, to make it easier on your readers' eyes, do try to leave a space after each comma, like so, . Don't caps your letters if your characters are shouting. Simple italics should suffice. Also.. your grammar goes a bit off at times, but generally it's okay. Revise this piece, and I'm sure it'll be much better.