Reviews for Butterfly Wings
Manju chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
awe! so cute. i love it! it's so going into my faves.
Toph Gonzalez chapter 1 . 1/11/2005
Haha! I kind of like this... the metaphor and all. It also closely resembles my haiku "Firefly in Flight" although the idea of a fleeting, fluttering feeling called love is more hidden. You might want to review it (it pitifully has only 3 reviews)
pointythings chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
Aw...it's sweet. I know the feeling.
BlytheBee chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
Wow, you said so much in only a few lines of work. I don't think it was sappy at all, merely a lovestruck thought. I REALLY liked it!
Joey7691 chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
It's mushy. It's sappy. It's corney. I love it!
;)
:)
erin chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
i dont get it
marsupialgroove chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
This is a very cute poem! I like how it described love and that much! lol. But yesm it was a haiku that had a very good description about feeling. Do you not do lover-dokvey poems often or something? If you odn't well, this is very good for a one-time thing! Please keep up the writing! Thanks for the fun read, Shadow of the Underdark
rachel chapter 1 . 7/3/2004
sappy, yes but sweet as well
FireNeiko chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
Cute fluffy-like-ness X3
apriltruro chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
It is the imagery that I find so captivating and creative. From now on when I see butterflies fluttering and hovering over some beautiful flower I will imagine sweethearts lingering nearby.
Mudder chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
Really beautiful!
Draugiks chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
No comment.
Akio the Dragon Master chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
aw... so sweet. -
Lil Sis chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
I like your short note at the end FOFWLMAO!
Not really but oh well it was still funny
Robert chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
i like an image
like an elbow touching her
now colored bugs flap
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