Reviews for Lost in a Dream |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love the characters so far! I think that Josh and Nathaniel should be a couple Sorry I haven't reviewed before! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this chapter a lot. I still think that the story would work better as an anime cartoon. Were you aiming for that this time? Anyway, write more soon. -Zelig BTW I finally updated my story!:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahaha you're story is hilarious! Man, you had me in stitches with your funky sense of humor. Good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry i didn't review the other two. I love it. I think that Airyel and Nathaniel should end up as a couple, but that is just me. ;) ladyevelynnanate |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. I'm mad coz i can't say 'longer chapter' needed to you lol. It's just right. keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Um...well...interesting. I like the plot, but the way you describe things, your story would work better if it was an anime cartoon...was that the idea? Anyway, please don't be offended by what I said; it really is quite good (better than all of the weird things I write...) Thanks for reviewing my story! -Zelig Rekanem |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool so far. I like your characters- especially Josh and Nathaniel. Keep it going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Keep up the good work Write more. ~eve |