Reviews for Lost in a Dream
venefican chapter 4 . 10/10/2004
Love the characters so far! I think that Josh and Nathaniel should be a couple Sorry I haven't reviewed before!
Oneirocritik chapter 4 . 7/26/2004
I liked this chapter a lot. I still think that the story would work better as an anime cartoon. Were you aiming for that this time?
Anyway, write more soon.
BTW I finally updated my story!:)
shyXshortieXbabe chapter 4 . 6/30/2004
hahahaha you're story is hilarious! Man, you had me in stitches with your funky sense of humor. Good work!
spidey waz here 10 min ago chapter 4 . 6/9/2004
Sorry i didn't review the other two.
I love it.
I think that Airyel and Nathaniel should end up as a couple, but that is just me.
Eagle Seance chapter 4 . 6/2/2004
Good chapter. I'm mad coz i can't say 'longer chapter' needed to you lol. It's just right. keep writing!
Oneirocritik chapter 3 . 5/31/2004
Um...well...interesting. I like the plot, but the way you describe things, your story would work better if it was an anime cartoon...was that the idea?
Anyway, please don't be offended by what I said; it really is quite good (better than all of the weird things I write...)
Thanks for reviewing my story!
-Zelig Rekanem
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 5/30/2004
Cool so far. I like your characters- especially Josh and Nathaniel. Keep it going!
spidey waz here 10 min ago chapter 1 . 5/30/2004
Great story. Keep up the good work
Write more.