|Reviews for confetti|
| Escapist chapter 1 . 8/6/2004
"the pop has gone flat"
It always takes me a second to realize what pop means. And I love the lines: "but he is always in his own head/his own world/his own glass of addiction"
I love love love the ending.
| this is britt chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
I read so many poems on this website, but yours are always the most striking and individualistic. There's such strong feeling in this one! As usual, I enjoyed it.
| BeyondRepair chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
Hey, I'm not so sure I got this one. I like the ideas presented in it, like the "crisis is reality skewed" dealy, that was good, and the other ones are as well. I didn't really get the end though, and I think there's was too many personal references in it for me to really understand, so good poem, although it didn't really click with me.