this story is grand. keep up the good work and writing. can't wait to read more

hi!
i like your story. it's so good. your characters and plot is very interesting.
thanks for reviewing my story! _

Okay, finally I got to read it. I tried to use the link in the 'author alert' e-mail, but my computer froze again. Well, its still cool, and I can accept the armor. Only, could you do a little more explaining some of the events in the future? I having a hard time keeping track of them, they go by so quick. Very cool chappie. And a cliffy is a cliffhanger.

Aye, A sort of semi cliff hanger there O.o or at least to me it is.
And as for Allia abd Jesseran, what do YOU want them to mean? And I live in Grand Prairie. Joyness...

Hey I really like your story.
However It would make it much easier to read if you started a new paragraph when you change speakers.
Also, more detail would be nice too...important events seem to rush by so quickly that I feel like i missed something in the plot.
You've got a wonderful last line! Keep up the good work!

Okay I don't believe this! My computer froze just as I tryed to reveiw for this. I swear this site hates me. Oh well. The last bit was a little confusing *cough a lot cough*. The last 2 paragraphs were weird. She's up to slapping him already? She a little ahead of herself, isn't she? Creepy show of temper. Okay that's enough. Stop writing.
-Linya the Great is triumphant.

Cool, um, but, armor? No one would bother making armor for a child that would grow out of it in a couple of months, so what did you really mean? ANd isn't she a little young to have to deal with boys? *Hit's stupid Linnorria on head* Sorry about that,' says Linya, 'it's still a pretty short chapter, but if you update this often it's worth it. I'm very excited with every little bit you give me. Did it have to be a cliffy though? *pleads*

Here I am. Great! It's just as good as you said it would be. I only see one problem. You are supose to start a new paragraph every time a new person speaks. It's correct grammer and it makes it easier to read. Still wonderful, amazing fantastic. (Is that enough now?) Keep writing.
-Linya the Great (Please don't ask)

Good story. I don't think I need to say 'update soon' coz you probably already do. Rock on!

so far so good!

Hmm...sounds very interesting so far. I love the ones set in medieval times! You're an excellent writer, please update soon.
P.S. You live in Texas? So do I.

Uhh...very interesting. Neat storyline. Reminds me of something I read...nevermind, I don't remember what it was. When is the next chapter?
~Lord Dragonblade
PS-ladyevelynnanate, my first chapter in "Dragonblade: Rise of the Dragon" is almost ready to be posted.

Ooh, nice... I don't have much to say, except, keep up the good work! .'