Reviews for My Pain Called is Love
softlycryingrain chapter 1 . 5/30/2004
Wow, this one was really good, I think I almost like it better than your others (although I did like those too)
I like how you talked about how love is always said to be beautiful, but in reality it often is painful. I also liked how you used shorter phrases in this one, it seems to emphasize your points. Great job! Well, I'd read more, but I've gotta go do dishes _
keep writing!
Kat
Sang Yu Nung chapter 1 . 5/30/2004
Sad... I like all the questions though, it added some different flavor to your poem... Good putting the common belief, and questioning it, while giving your own ideas without stating it.. Fantastic!