Reviews for Love, my Killer
softlycryingrain chapter 1 . 5/30/2004
wow, that was really sad! (which makes sense, since it was under tragedy)
good job at expressing the emotion, I really liked how you used repetition like
"My mind is fried and scrambled by love.
My body is battered and beaten by love.
My heart is broken and shattered..."
thanks for reviewing my poem! I'm always glad to return the favor. :D