Reviews for Temptation
Dirty Wallpaper chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
damn, im not way to tired to even attempt to interpret this poem. a very rich one, alot of rich and glittery images, reminded me of india and its many jewels.
kudos!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
I dont know but the descriptions are amazing
Heather Montgomery chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
Yet another beautiful poem, Mia. You're a master of imagery, you really are. This is so lovely! And of course, I still envy your talent for rhyming. *shakes her fist at all people who can rhyme* *giggles* Wonderful poem, hun. *hugs*
IHJ chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
Ah, yes, I know what you mean now. It doesn't directly say what we were talking about but it does make it clear that you prefer all types and are not really finicky.
Nice rhymes as usual, but I'd like to see some variety in rhyming...then again, we have our own style.
Izzy J.
Sarah Parker chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
Wow.. I'm always so impressed by your imagery and descriptiveness... you poems are always so.. MAGICAL! Yet another great one.