Reviews for True Love's First Kiss
Flamed chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
Oh...and I say again, oh...:) You did it justices. Much better then the brief description you tried to give me when I was half asleep. The only thing I might work on is the begining of the second paragraph and oh...I can't find it now, never mind anyways. Yeah, that one part doesn't run too smoothly, and the readers mind has to untangle it to understand it. I know sometimes it's impossible to avoid that, but just thought I'd point it out in case there was something you could do bout it.
Elioclya chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
Aw... wow. That was just beautiful.
Sober-and-Humorless chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
Oh gosh, this is really sweet. You write really well. Good job and keep on writing.