Reviews for Pandemonium 42 |
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![]() ![]() o suspense! That's so cool. I love all the random crap. I'm moving today and am having similar experiences...although i've been trying to change my clothes just by thinking about it and its not going very well...guess i'll just have to be wet and grungy 'til i unpack something else. Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() joy! a mission! and a pretty wedding...*evil grin* so Frankie...about those cauliflowers... |
![]() ![]() Just read this again. forgot how fucking great it is! |
![]() ![]() yes i totaly understand it ! keep going this is realy good ! |
![]() ![]() i love it. and i totally get it... although that might not help much for the rest of your audience. the "you dork" paragraph made me giggle. Its perfect 3am genius. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the God Lands stuff made sense...at least i think so! a place where all the dieties ever created by man live? sounds fair enough ;o) very interesting, all the stuff about Jay...though i had assumed that he wasn't that old (ie. old enough to have had a wife etc!). anyway, it was all great - worth waiting for! i see you got the Rudolph thing in too - nice one! |
![]() ![]() fantastic as always. i like where it's going. only problem is its made me want tea. now i have to get up... and possibly buy milk... |
![]() ![]() This is really good. please keep up the great work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that has a nice, cosy ending...I hope you're not planning to interrupt a good nights sleep with something dreadful...! anyway, that was a great chapter...very interesting about the mirror, btw...quite freaky that they were able to see what was going on elsewhere in the house, many years ago! keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() as ever brilliant ! very well done keep it up ! travis xcelant as allways ! |
![]() ![]() as ever exelant... is peter erm who i think he is ? can't wait for chapter five !- travis |
![]() ![]() o! Cam, i love it! Its so good and i didn't even notice that it's all dialogue. It just so weird and so... right. *giggles* "i am Inigo Montoya, you killed my father. Prepare to die..." |
![]() ![]() ![]() very interesting...cool way of looking at the whole werewolf thing. *thinks of a pun, giggles, but doesnt say it* the thing is italics was a flashback, yeah? i suppose we'll have to wait to find out what it was all about...! am also just loving 'emily robertson' - 'For a moment, she almost looked sorry. That was, of course, until she sank the knife into his gut and laughed coldly and callously' - brilliant! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great! it explained a lot about those living in the house, which was good - i enjoyed Travis and the ghost, for some reason! looking forward to reading more! |
![]() ![]() Spendiferous as always, m'dear! You better keep updating this :-) |