Reviews for Wrong
til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
I like it. Simple words, simple format. Perfect for it.
keep writing-
til-iburnout
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
that was an absolutly wonderful piece of work! i love the way you leave "wrong" and "alone" one thier own line. really adds impact. i love this! such a wonderful poem, so strong with so few words.
Steel Winged Angel chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
So short, yet the point is very clearly shown. Getting a short poem to protray such a powerful message is difficult, but you do very well. Nice work!