|Reviews for Endgame|
| Nathan chapter 2 . 1/5/2008
Smooth work, damned pity it was left to die by all appearances.
| KimHua chapter 1 . 3/14/2007
Nice setup for the story - you've crafted a neat political system that I can only envy. :-)
| averroes chapter 2 . 6/12/2005
Very interesting and well written. One question though - is it going to be finished?
| Saint Josmane chapter 2 . 4/21/2005
Nice work! If you're reading this, add another sodding chapter, please!
| biminator chapter 2 . 10/9/2004
hmm. interesting chapter. I like how you constructed the politics of the assembled government. nice job. update soon.
| RCS chapter 2 . 10/7/2004
Discriptive and gripping. Update soon. And "soon" means sometime before next year...heh heh.
| Mbwun chapter 1 . 7/8/2004
Well, snap. Sounds like someone's about to unleash mightily. I hope you plan on continuing this; I see you haven't updated in a while.
He Who Walks On All Fours
| KyranHayyt chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
interesting so far, ill keep reading for sure.
(by the way, on your profile Rolnald emmerich just added "the day after tomorrow" to his list of movies"
| CommandoCody chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
Hm...the same, and yet different—probably 'cause of the political dimension. I am entertained and intrigued; please continue.
| RCS chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
Good beginning to a sci-fi technothriller. How long between updates on this one? (Like I should talk about expedient updates).
| Calvin Fitzgerald chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
Great sci-fi story and the best part was the explanation of the interplanetary politics. Very life like, very realistic. It reads like something Tom Clancy would write if he were to write a sci fi story. Is this going to be a short story or is it going to be closer to a novel? At this point it looks like it could go either way. Excellent character building as well. Keep working on this one, I want to read more.
| sieg45 chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
Great beginning update soon please please r&r my story too . ?storyid715203
| biminator chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
oh. very nice cliffhanger. good story. update soon.