I'm sorry about your dog. I really like your stories, lol I guess I'm in love with my best friend too. Have you ever read Angus, thongs and full frontal snogging by Louise Rennison? If you like Meg Cabot u'll prolly like them too. Keep writing please!

I love this story, 'cause it is realistic... if you never been kissed you totally obsess over it and you want the fairytale ending with your best friend and all that crap. I'm so sad for you about your dog. Anywho, fantastic story.

this was lovely. very philosophical ending. really good. well done.

It was a great ending for a great story. Thank you. And, I'm sorry to here about your dog. If my cat ever died, I'd have to mourn too... Aw crap, now I'm sad! *Thinks about the story* *gets happy again* Write more soon!

;_; it's over. *sniff sniff* i am going to cry. I hate endings. I always get touchy. Just because i know the characters are gone. god you should see me whan i am done with my stories! I start crying like no tomorrow just b/c i know i am finished. I think i might have said this al ready to you. hm all well i am sayin it again you can skip though it if you have. but yea i just cry b/c i know they wont be around no more and they have become like part of me. So when it is over i have to start a new story right away. The story i am doin now (only 2 chappie) i have a 8 chappie 1 to. But the 2 chappie one i have been working on for about a year now (in a note book i am typin it now) So when it is over i will start bawling. I mean come on it is like moving away. LOL me and my life i tell you i am screwed up. HAHAHA well ne way great story it is definatly stayin on my fav story list! THANKF FOR THE GREAT STORY! I hope to see more from ya.
C-YA LATERS
HJO (Heather)

i sound so stupid in the review but its the truth lol

i hate u so much. u made me cry through the whole thing. i hate u. y did u have to put that song in there? thats the sadest song i've ever heard, i hate u ,ur so mean to me. it was the best story i've ever read. ur the best i love u! lol
i say it all the time
( u seriously made me cry though...a lot)

WOW! That was great! I love this story...its one of my favorites on fictionpress. You are a wonderful author. I can't wait to see what kind of story you come out with next! Thanks! :)

Is that the end?
Was Tony's death also a suicide?
Did Dex commit suicide for any specific reason... like... um... something?

Oh I love it! I absolutely adore it! THe ending was just so perfect with the rest of it. It ties up the lose ends perfectly yet it isn't over explaned. It really is just wonderful.

I LOVE this story. Lydia makes a great heroine in the story. She doesn't act like a complete bitch like Miss Scarlett in Gone with the Wind. But I don't know if she loves Kale or not. Because it seems that she loves Grafton. Or maybe she likes Grafton just so she could get kissed.
Kale: I want a friend like Kale. He's so sweet and such a romantic. And he loves her so much that he'd rather have her get her wish to have her first kiss even if it wasn't with him. I love him.
Grafton: It's confusing. He seems like a nice guy and such a good friend that he didn't kiss Lydia.
Tony: He wasn't in the story much just that he died and some flashbacks. But if I had an older brother I would want him to be just like that. Have you ever seen or watched The Outsiders because he reminds of Sodapop and Ponyboy mixed in.
Dexter: It's sad that he died. I don't know what to say about him.

Lydia: She's great, i love her
Kale: I absolutely love him, i think he's a sweety
Grafton: he's ok but a bit of an ass.
Tony: he seemed like a nice guy
Dexter: also seems like a nice guy!
Totally loved this chapter! I really hope that Kale and Lydia kiss. I thinm they are perfect 4 each other. I also think you are very evil for leaving it there.

hey honey... i'm sorry.. i know how hard it is to let go of someone. Anyway... the story. i really liked... although i was a little distracted by outside influences... uhmm... i love the lake scene... very romantic. as for the characters... i already shared my opinions with you, so... yea. im really curious what youre gonna write about from here... since all teh crazy character relationships seem more or less resolved. anyway... good luck writing.

Your crazy not to think your characters rock. Lydia: she sounds like a normal girl. I mean all but the obsession with kissing but i was like that when i didn't have mine tell i was 16 (still am 16 got my first like 2 weeks agao) She seems awsome
KAle: Awsome i have a friend just like him which makes it even better. He seems to care a lot about his friends and not to affraid to show his emotions always find that interestin in a guy
Grafton: Oh the evil grafton. He is cool but an ass like you put him. Although he id have a "crush" on Lydia he knew about his friends feelings and wanted KAle to be happy too. He seems to be considerate.
Tony & Dex: Seem like cool guys. It suxs they both had to die but it added more drama. It is cool.
Wellthere u go you made your characters really life like I love em all. And when u finish i will be here on my com crying b/c i wont see them no more. LOL i do that with my stories. I finish it and cry b/c i know i can't help them ne more. They are on there own. Wierd huih. LOL well BYE! (read my story too please give me advice and stuff) PLEASE

this is a great story you should continue the story