Reviews for Shiver When Wet |
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Lizzy2 chapter 8 . 6/22/2004 yes! They finally got together! So sappy, yet do good. Don't worry! I'm a major sap too! |
Lizzy2 chapter 7 . 6/22/2004 that was so sad I cried |
Lizzy2 chapter 6 . 6/22/2004 talk about an emotional rollercoaster! |
Lizzy2 chapter 5 . 6/22/2004 wow! she skipped the kiss and went rioght to the fake orgasm! funny |
Lizzy2 chapter 3 . 6/22/2004 the nose thing was so funny and so cute! O My God, if I had a guy do that to me, I would melt! |
Lizzy2 chapter 2 . 6/22/2004 O My God! I so know how you feel. I am the dork in my class, well I was, I is gradgiated now :) lol If you want to check out my stories, be my guest They are: Seeing Kate Seeing Kate 2 and Ryan's story I love reviews, hint hint. byes lizzy 2 |
silverusagi chapter 8 . 6/22/2004 aw you must update great story please update. |
natmarie chapter 4 . 6/22/2004 Hah, timon is a mearcat (sp?) not a prarie dog. I love Lyds thoughts in this and the fact that Kale and her are friends. And the wholel kissing thing, aww, he is dating, hope she doesnt' fall for him. wait what am I saying, that would be perfect. Off to read more. Gnat |
fuzzinuzzi421 chapter 8 . 6/22/2004 JFC! I was SO not expecting that author's note! Um.. in reply to it.. I am totally head-over-heels ga-ga in LOVE with Kale, Lydia makes me wonder about my sanity, Grafton seems like a schmuck/ really queer friend to have.. wish he had gotten more of an exit scene, and Tony seems just as good if not more appealing than his brother and from what I've heard of Dexter he seem's... like he's made a girl shiver once or twice... Hope that helps, write ore soon! |
natmarie chapter 3 . 6/22/2004 Of course all girls like My Girl (mucully Culkin), Casper(Devon Sowa), and Gold Diggers (can't remember the guys name hehe). Lol. yeah. You sure pick neat names, Grafton...sweet. Hahah, her nose. I love Lydia's thoughts and Grafton sounds mega hot and sweet. But Kale might be too, hmm... Off to ch 4 Gnat |
natmarie chapter 2 . 6/22/2004 haha, cool, this Kale sounds like a nice guy, I wonder if it is him she gets to go on the blind date with. He sounds sweet. Love the humor you add to this. Off to read chapter 3. Gnat |
natmarie chapter 1 . 6/22/2004 Hey, I was clicking through some of the romance fics and this caught my eye. It sounds great. I totatally agree about the whole movie thing. I so deserve Chad Michael Murray more than Hillary DUff or Lindsey Lohan. LOL. I can't wait to see what this individual does to change that, off to read the next chapter. Check out my fics if you like romance and humor. Love to hear from you. Gnat |
FamousOneLiners chapter 8 . 6/22/2004 I just love this story, it's very well written and it's just the kind of story that you can relate to, it's beautifully written for those hopeless romantics, with quirky characters like Kale and Lydia to bring you back to real life, I have nothing but good things to gush about it. |
FamousOneLiners chapter 1 . 6/22/2004 I Love this beginning, sadly sounds like me :] So are glasses. So is Emo and sexy eyes. DUDE YOU ARE SO RIGHT haha |
stanhops chapter 8 . 6/22/2004 This is such a cute story... I'm glad I checked it out. These past few days Ihaven't been reviewing much (laziness), but I definitely considered your tale worthy of review. Lydia- She's funny and very easy to relate to. Her narration is very cunning and really draws you in and makes you feel what she's feeling. Kale (you know that's a vegetable, right?)- You really confused me with him for the first chapter. I thought he was just a locker buddy/Lydia's infatuation or something and not a best friend. But I really like the way he is portrayed and the new developments with Lydia and him. Grafton- He was a really good character until these past few chapters. There was no warning of his jerkiness before this and it kind of came out of no where. I do like him though and hope this comment does not offend you. Tony- I kept confusing him with Dex, but I kind of get a picture of how close he was to Kale. Dex- the whole suicide thing kind of threw me... All of a sudden Lydia knew and I must of missed when all of this was explained. Yeah the picture, but I would have expected a bit more info. And I hope I've been helpful and that I didn't downplay any of your characters. I want to tell you that I really enjoy your tale (*adds story to favorites) and I can't wait for more. I especially liked the "steamy scene" in this chapter. Post more ASAP. -de Leon |