wonderful prolouge! I love it so far, lol and there was barely anything there, but it got me to want to read on! I must go now, I may come back later to read more if I have the time. Please read and review ~trippyangel

I'm so sorry Ember that I haven't had chance to review the story, but I've been so busy at the college, my computer hasn't even seen me!
Anyway, the conclusion is cool but I'm a bit disappointed with the ending. Ariel disappears, and yet you don't tell us what's going on? I suppose you're saving it for the sequel. Good idea, Ember, that's what I always do. Keep 'em in suspense eh? lol.
I changed my name to Lord Zuriel, kinda doing what you've done, put your pen name as a character from one of your stories. Well Lord Zuriel isn't gonna be on the internet for a long time. He's coming into a story I'm still writing, but you don't wanna here about that. Well, I'm review 101 and that aliasfan seems to be your most trusted fan. Aliasfan should change his/her name to Embersilverlyfan or something like that!
But anyway Ember. Well done. And good luck with the sequel and The One Between.
-Lord Zuriel
(I've updated Baker's Watch. Please R&R)

hey, it's me! i didn't log in because then it would have said that i reviewed for this already. i just wanted to review because it was killing me that you had 99 reviews. so there, now you have 100! _

the end? aw! but i'm glad you're coming out with a sequel! yay! hey, i'm the 99th review, so have someone review this so you can have 100 reviews! _ i loved your story and am eagerly awaiting the sequel!

poor kheon. that's gotta be hard when you can forsee your own death! but sater seems like he'll be a great guardian!

man, you're almost at 100 reviews! way ta go! *celebrates*.

that's good that they have this whole organized thing for the star warriors. nothing can get in their way now! that's cool how sarathi's children had her healing trait, and it's amazing that they can heal the emotional drainage by the demons.

oh no! why did ariel disappear? well, i think i'll find out next chappie! :) i'm catching up! _

yay, second chance with trigg (man, 100 years later!). but that was sad, 'cause if trigg loved takea and she loved him then he had the right to kiss her!

wow, that was cool how mecene came back and is now 'living'. but yah, it was kheon right? man, i'm tired myself. it's 2:43 in the morning. but, i really want to read this! hopefully i can read the rest of the chappies, i might fall asleep at the computer (not that your chappies are boring, just that i'm exhausted!) XP

man, poor trigg. and the star protectors were completely unaware of what was going on, and most importantly, what could have happened if trigg wasn't there. could there be a chance that takea, paul, mord, and ariel turn out like the ex-protectors? hopefully not, right? :P

how long will the seal last? hopefully a long time, 'cause the star protectors worked so hard and took so long to seal it!

ahh! they're about to perform the sealing! what will happen? wait, i can read the next chappie! muahahaha!

wow, takea didn't lose control of her powers for 200 years? that's a long time! well, it looks like i have 10 more chappies to go to catch up!

oh yes, i see. mord was strengthening his stone. got it! okay, i've already told you a million times, but i love your story and you're doing an excellent job! :)