Reviews for Make You Love Me
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
Nicely done. But dear I don't think you can force anyone's feelings, ever. Just got to let it flow naturally. But, a beautiful piece I must say.
Jenna xx
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
So much emotion, I like your use of words! :)
teh tarik chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
Sweet, emotional, great imagery. I love the line *how the air clung bteween us* Great choice of words _
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
wow that was beautiful! a small typo which is fine because each and every piece i have has tons of them. beautiful! ive been waiting awhile to see you up date again, and it was definatly worth this long wait!