|Reviews for Far Away|
| Safety Canary chapter 1 . 7/4/2004
Yay! Same Linmenel I remember. I really do like your work. I had this thing where I wasn't honest half the time, but now I'm starting new, and I just want you to know I never lied... I really do like your poetry, and I normally don't like poetry at all, so... yeah.
... Burn, burn the station / Burn burn the truth / In celebration / For us, for them, for you...
| arbysauce93 chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
This is beautiful. Honestly, that was just beautiful. I love the lines, "The sun fills the sky, The martians awaken, The streetlamps all die." Definately one of my favorites. The only suggestion I have is that it seems like you punctuate it unevenly. Some ends of sentences/thoughts have periods, and some don't. keep writing!