Reviews for the bones
frugale chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
A powerful start for a poem that ends up being seriously bitter and humourous in a way. Love the themes, love the way it was written.
teh tarik chapter 1 . 6/18/2004
*I count myself in calories*
*but lovely, lovely, lovely bones spindle thin, they remain*
*when I am made of fire*
WOW..this is the type of poetry that leaves me completely speechless...that was just simply great, with rather dark imagery or anorexia. This is amazing work.
Pennhothwen chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
Truly excellent work. I am proud. *bows*
GreyLadyBast chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
I'm really not sure what to say about this. It's provocative and depressing, but I think that's what you're going for.
Anjerla chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
Oh. Creepy. I like it, the imagery is wonderful and your use of repitition is good. Heh, big words. It's really all filler ;). It comes down to this...I like it!