Oh, God. I love this story so much.

Seriously. It's like my number one fave story, tied with S.J. Mass' masterpiece and CrystalMaiden's Cat's eye.

It's short. But it speaks volumes.

And I am also in love with Vertice. He is too sexy, that one.

AH where ARE YOU!

I fucking LOVE this cool story; man, i wish you would continue writing...I fucking love your style, grace, plot, character development, etc.,etc., and most especially, how absolutely fucking hot Vertice is. Man, I want some of that :)

UPDATE something, write something, are you alive!

I miss your stories like Irish missed Vertice while she was on tour.( as much as the proverbial ' fat kid loves cake')

okay i love this story and I want it to reach at least 100 revies

I just want to say: this is one of the most amazing stories i read on fictionpress. I don't know what else to say or how else to say it...your language, character development, plot, etc...it was all just absolutely brilliant...I really don't know why this story doesn't have more reiews, especially with the cliched, poorly-written pieces floating around...I think the two things that are deterring further reviews are 1) the current lack of reviews 2) and the shortness...but this is an amazing work and deserves so much more...honestly, i just fell in love with this story and you do not know how many stories i have read...I have read hundreds and hundreds(seriously, i get bored!)..so i know what i'm talking about when i praise your story...great job and I really want to see future works from you!

Hi :)

I can't remember if I've reviewed before, but well another review to express my divine admiration for your writing can't hurt, can it? Haha.

I really love your writing style - it always seems to flow effortlessly, but in a lazy-I-can't-be-fucked kind of way. It really suits the setting of your stories. I also adore your characters. They're not perfect but they're so real.

Okay, that's enough sicophantic, fan girliness from yours truly! Look forward to reading more from you :) Perhaps something unrelated to these characters aka no spinoffs...not that I don't enjoy them, but it's like watching sequels - good but never up to par with the original.

COH.

j'adore. i really liked the fic. a little gem under all those million fics out there. i was kinda surprised that the issue with damon turned out to be really really serious. but in the end i got my happy end so i'm glad. i'm always amazed how different the punk scene is in the us. well, actually i'm usually confused about the alternative scene there with all the goth, emo, scater and what not. it's more clear cut in my country. but in the fiction on this site it seems often mingled together. but this fic showed at least punk is not always so terrible main stream as what mtv plays.

THEIR KID(s?)! Have it be twins, a girl who is the main character, and is a perfect belnd between her parents, and cold hearted bitch (as a defense mechanism) and her brother, ruler of the highschool, jock god, prep. I have no suggestions for the plot, though. great story! I loved it! :)

Holy frack. A sex scene like that is officially my goal.

Wow! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your wonderful story. And thank you for the happy ending, i dont think it was too rushed, it was just the way it should be and i couldnt wait for it to happen. The ending was great and the finishing sentence good, but i think you might want to work a bit more on the begginning of the story, mainly the first quarter of the first chapter, i think it starts inaccurately slowly, considering the lightning-fast speed of the rest of the story. I think this story deserves a catching first paragraph, the kind which leaves you dissatisfied and wanting to read more, and more... im pretty sure youre able to write it just fine.

Good luck!

omg i love this story. it was so punk lol. i loved all the clothes irish wore as well especially the red dress. you're a fantastic writer and you obviously know what you're talking about as well

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AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!

This was absolutely awesome. NIce and understated, but still covering all the issues inherent in the lives of some very complex characters... Refreshingly authentic punk, as opposed to the general prepackadged shit that comes out nowadays under the emo blanket.

Erisah

I like the story. The part of the story based on the music and shows was really realistic.

What's with calling people cats? Like "the cool cats of Washdown...". Just say it out loud. It's really funny.

I loved this story. pretty much couldn't stop reading it. ]

Aw, I liked it! I shall now read your other stories!