This story was really great. The characters were very good, and I liked the band's relationship to each other. Also, the plot was original, something that ALWAYS is a big plus. (Gah, I get so tired of "Barbie gets together with punk" stories.)Anyway. Brilliant story, love it to bits. Have to read the sequel now. :D

haha, that was a really cute ending.

I'll read the sequel tomorrow .. or next weekend. I don't know.

:O

I liked this chapter.

I hope I can finish the next one before I have to go to sleep.

yay, bad religion!

hm .. I still like the story.

I'm getting pissed at Irish for being all .. weak and not being able to get over it. I guess it's hard. I don't know. I've never been in a relationship.

Four chapters left.

I like this story so far. It's cute.

I thought that that Vertice guy was kinda annoying until this chapter. He seems a lot nicer.

Sweet. In some of your chapter that you wrote have lyrics in them. And your lyrics a really good. I like. Plus the whole story is awesome too. I would have reviwed yesterday when I got done reading this story, but I had to go. Anyway just wanted to you are a good writer and can't wait to read more of your work. Later.

Thoroughly enjoyed that ) Thankyou! haha. Basically liked how it was written and all. Mostly frank... bah, just liked it! haha. p

Hm. Vertice seems to have gotten over Barbie real quick. Sure hope he ain't rebounding on Irish (how'd she get her name anyway..?), though it sure doesn't look that way. Damon is.. and interesting character. Wonder what the history is there p

See, at first I thought maybe she was the black sheep of the family and so going for such functions made everyone stare at her and recall what she'd done wrong. That was before there was any semblance of description of her. and now, I'm no more the wiser about who she really is. haha. Draws in my attention! Good stuff! ) haha. the whole telling you some stuff but keeping the rest mysterious. Which it is really. I wanna know who she is! and what she does! p

Hey! Oh i am so gutted that i missed reading this when you were posting it, i've just sat here and re-read it and realised that i hadn't left a review shock horror lol. This is a REALLY GREAT story, i love the band idea, and Vertice and Irish were amazing together. Your ending was perfect and all the other characters were brilliant! I hope that you're really proud of yourself for writing this because it truly is one of the better storys that i've read on thie web. Keep on writing whatever you do!

Great story! Well worthy of the hours of sleep I'm missing because of it!

You go. You fucking kick ass.

I so seriously loved this story I wanted to cry. You rock. You rock you rock you rock! It kicked. Continue writing. God forbid you don't!
Props, Shae

i loved it. absolutely loved it. i read your whole thing about the punk thing and what not (god i have serious ADD...so i forget the main jist of it-) but i do not- after reading the story, this story was so about the people, not the music (which is still important) but...their relationships, ups and downs were so intense. yeah..now im rambling

cool story. liked it.