|Reviews for shadow games|
| Forgotten Lore chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
Hey, I found this poem because it has the same title as one of my poem. I particularly enjoyed the references to the shadows. However some of the lines seem a bit ambiguous, such as:
"My body stilled bruised form the stares I was given."
I would reccomend that you proofread a little more before posting, but other than that, keep writing your best )Sincerely,Forgotten Lore
| Fairy in Black and White chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
O, I like this. Dark, angsty. My kinda stuff! I love the line "My body still bruised from the stares I was given". Awesome poem.
| JoseJavi chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
i really liked it, its original. im looking forward to reading more of your it up...