Reviews for Tears
my-vision chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
your poetry takes my breath away. i guess that's what a mixture of a centered hope and stunning imagery does to me! very nice. i especially like how you stretch out "downward" in the 3rd to last line. lulling.
God bless you & your BEAUTIFUL poetry!
Kaylana chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
W00t. Imagery indeed. *nods approvingly*
Eirien chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
Perfectly beautiful. Your imagery is stunning, you never cease to amaze. "darklit ocean" Wow, what an oxymoron. "Wind-driven pearls" Simply masterful. Wonderful poem.
cael chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
*gasps for air*
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"The remnants of a dream in diamond technicolor"
Wowowowowow. This is so good!
"Let them slip, drops
Between long, pale fingers"
Man. KEEP WRITING.
Rigalphantisi911 chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
pretty. i like the "weird imagery."
It has an... aura? no... air? eh, whatever... it seems sad. i especially like the 5th line and the last 2. very nice writing
Getuie chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
This piece almost brought this reader some tears of her own. Beautiful, but incredibly sad. I love the imagery... It is just so vivid, so incredibly real.
sunraven chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
beautiful.
rarely does someone really understand what we mean when we say we're crying. i can feel the pain of loss as the speaker begins to cry...(maybe because all i've been doing lately is crying?) well anyway, i love it.