Reviews for Bleed
glow worm chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
i love this. not to mention the orig. song as well. it rocks!
hakubaikou chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
no matter how many times i read this... nothing changes the fact that it's nice. really nice.
Deidre chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
yokata na...its a nice shows how you truly feel. But if you would let me may I suggest a few things? A friend told me to avoid using the same words over and over again though I understand why you used the word 'heart' because tahts sort of the subject of your poem, well thats how I understood it but the rest, well maybe you should try using synonyms for them so it would appear a bit more 'wide ranged' so to speak.
Pero maganda ung piece it shows your emotions though parang obvious na dinerive siya dun sa song but its alright.
I believe there are no boundaries to what a person's emotions are and how they show or release them.
keep it up. I'll read your other entries soon. _
hope I didnt offend you or anything.
rai chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
it was excellent chi and very brilliant...future poet/writer!
queenvixta chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
I'm definetly gonna have to check out this song. This is great! :D