Reviews for Windows
glow worm chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
yea. the ending could use a little revising, but it's ok.
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
I love the rhyming. Maybe the endings not the best but the rest is amazing. Wow!
ChristinaLeLievre chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
Hey!I really liked ur poem...it is original...i really like it..well ttyl
heterochromia chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
I actually enjoyed this poem. The content was written with excellence and managed to produce some fairly good imagery. The ending was good too, the repetition helped. Nice work.
hamsta-gurl