Reviews for Mommy
Starless Night chapter 1 . 12/25/2014
(Too lazy to log in, pen name is up there)
So eerily beautiful. So creepily beautiful. It sends chills up my spine, thinking about how the could be imagined. And it holds the message about child Abuse as well, Keep up the good work.
SirScott chapter 1 . 7/4/2004
Interesting poem. Keeping writing.
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
*nods* not bad, nicely done. Watch out for the repitition though if it works well but I suppose in this case the "mommy" being repeated is a good idea. I like the whole theme and the title.
Jenna xx
Kat chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
Yet another really cool song-poem of yours... You should make a tune to them, that would be great. I love the way you incorperate innocent images into a darker theme.
Whitepaws chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
A very chilling poem, I liked very much the toy images, they really add a lot to the mood. I especially like the bit about the bears with sewn on smiles and the description about the dolls. Great Job!
picturesandpills chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
i kind of liked this one. the line "ivory dolls won't tell mommy you're sad" is very very good at getting attention.