Reviews for Mommy
SirScott chapter 1 . 7/4/2004
Interesting poem. Keeping writing.
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
*nods* not bad, nicely done. Watch out for the repitition though if it works well but I suppose in this case the "mommy" being repeated is a good idea. I like the whole theme and the title.
Jenna xx
Kat chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
Yet another really cool song-poem of yours... You should make a tune to them, that would be great. I love the way you incorperate innocent images into a darker theme.
Whitepaws chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
A very chilling poem, I liked very much the toy images, they really add a lot to the mood. I especially like the bit about the bears with sewn on smiles and the description about the dolls. Great Job!
picturesandpills chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
i kind of liked this one. the line "ivory dolls won't tell mommy you're sad" is very very good at getting attention.